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Finally..People won't be there, even if I cried.
People wouldn't care, even if I died.

Everyone starts leaving.
While I continue on bleeding.

Nobody can hear my cries anymore.
I don't understand what life is worth living for.

I'm slowly giving up.
As I push the dagger through my gut.

I let out one last tear.
Before I cry out my only fear.

I've died here alone.
And no one is even home.

I'm left in the dark
While others seem to part.

I'm dead, I'm done.
Oh look, I've found a gun.

This will surely finish it.
No more life, not one bit.

I hold it to my head.
Boom, And I'm dead.

Finally, it's all over.
I Wonder..I wonder what It'd be like..
To go and commit suicide.

Will it be soft and gentle.
Or rough under the metal.

Will I feel relieved
Or hard to believe.

I'm not so sure anymore.
I just need to find a cure.

I wonder what it'd be like..
To go and commit suicide.

Will people start to cry
Or will they leave with a sigh.

Will my moments be treasured
Or my life span left measured.

I really don't know
But I'd really like to go.

I wonder what it'd be like..
To go and commit suicide.

Will my friends stand by my coffin
Or whither and be forgotten.

Will they look into my crying eyes.
Or my heart full of lies.

I just want to end it all.
I'll go j
DeathI don't know why I'm writing this,
all I have to say,
Is death may be a life style,
That we'll all pick up one day
Unheard StoriesYou always hear or read those stories about preventing suicide. Or for when you want to stop bullying, trying to be more considerate for others. Some that you may have read is the famous story of a young girl who commits suicide and it explains how her whole family and school reacts. How her bullies regretted what they said and all that. And then how a little boy who is crying, you make fun of him, and it turns out that he's crying because his mother died. But what about those who never experienced that? Those who are just having a bad life together? Or for those that are struggling. They still cry..but the most famous stories are about someo
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there are things that no need to understand, there are things that wont change. its for example the feeling like love.
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Mood: Love *surrealistic-gloom Jan 19, 2013
Beautifully written! :heart:
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Mood: Love ~MinetHerzog Jan 20, 2013
thank you so much :huggle:
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~Pen-and-mouse Jan 7, 2013
You described it in a quite beautiful way! :heart:
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~MinetHerzog Jan 9, 2013
thank u :glomp:
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Mood: Love ~Yancis Dec 31, 2012
:tighthug:
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Mood: Love ~MinetHerzog Jan 1, 2013
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*cant find that hot kissin icon u have sent :D
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Mood: Humor ~Yancis Jan 1, 2013
These ones? :iconkissmote::iconkissmote::iconkissmote: ;)
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~MinetHerzog Jan 1, 2013
yes yes that is yup i love it remide me for that wet kinda kisses, hotty as hella :D
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Mood: Eager ~Yancis Jan 1, 2013
Yeah... very low wet kisses... njammy! :icondaydreamplz:
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~MinetHerzog Jan 1, 2013
:faint:
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